Trying to squeeze blood from a stone, a Blackstone, to be precise.

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If you have not read the Blackstone Trilogy, and intend to do so in the future, please do not read any further. This blog post is intended for those readers who have finished reading, Blackstone Resurrection, the final book in the Blackstone Trilogy.

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So after I published Blackstone Resurrection, I received an enquiry from a reader as to whether there would be more added to the story about Aidan and Lily, a type of epilogue, to tie up loose ends, much like I had done with the Driftwood Trilogy, where I wrote an epilogue of how the characters were doing ten years later. In that case it felt necessary, to give peace to all the characters, and to show them in more normal circumstances, and more content. It felt right.

In the case of the Blackstone Trilogy, I attempted to do the same, as I’m always keen to please my readers, and if they wanted an epilogue, well, then I would write one. But I came up against a brick wall, again and again, bashing my fists bloody as I tried to break through. My creativity fled as I tried to invent a story where, quite frankly, there was no longer a story. It was finished, even though I had not been certain of that when I had agreed to do an epilogue or short novelette.

I hate to disappoint even one reader, but in the past months I have grown tired of trying to squeeze blood from a stone. It influenced my love of writing to the point where I began to avoid my laptop, and sometimes weeks would go by without me writing a single word. At first I thought something would come to me, and I would find a way to continue the story, but nothing came. And because I was keeping Aidan and Lily in my imagination, it prevented other characters from moving in, and prevented me from starting the standalone book I had been so keen on writing after I had completed Blackstone Resurrection.

So basically I have had around six months of barely writing. That’s not to say that I’ve been sitting around staring out the window. My life has become incredibly busy, as my 12 year old niece started coming to my house in the afternoon so that I could look after her and help her with homework. This was something that I had asked for so it was important to me to make time for her. Also the person who had been helping out with my shelter left my employ, and I have not been able to find a replacement. So in the morning it was doing my shelter work, sorting out 38 cats every morning, releasing them into the garden so that I could clean out and sweep their rooms and wooden huts, and clean around 22 sandboxes that had been used during the night. So it was cats in the morning, kid in the afternoon, and in the evening I was cooking supper for my two aged parents.

Yes, so hardly a minute spare to do anything, especially as initially my energy levels were so low after my second thyroid operation. But I can feel I’m back to normal now, and I can get the cats done in two hours in the morning, mainly because I’m moving faster now. And my niece has improved her marks, so she no longer requires such close attention from me. So now suddenly I have a few hours a day available to write, but what to write?

I want to outline the reasons why I feel that it isn’t possible to do an epilogue of Blackstone Resurrection. Let’s start with Suzy. Should there be some kind of resolution to her relationship with Lily, after all they had been friends for a few years, and she had been so concerned for Lily and the baby. Yes, to the point that she had betrayed Lily, and by extension, Aidan, almost costing Lily her life, and Aidan his freedom. Aidan endured months of terrible living conditions and beatings, but the worst was not knowing if Lily was alive or dead. Lily too, even though her living circumstances were better, had suffered great anguish not knowing what had happened to Aidan. One can say that Suzy didn’t know any better, that she had done what she thought was best under the circumstances, but I think we can all agree that Charles’ story of being the father of Lily’s child was fishy at best, and Suzy should’ve known that Lily would have taken her into her confidence if that had been the case. But Suzy had been so emotionally involved and caught up in her ‘hatred’ of Aidan that she was no longer thinking rationally. All of this is up for debate, of course, but consider the following. Would Lily be able to forgive Suzy for what she had done, even if it had been done in ignorance? Would Lily ever be able to trust Suzy again, knowing how easily she had been manipulated by Charles? How would Lily protect Suzy from Aidan, who would surely vaporize Suzy if he ever set eyes on her again? I think it’s obvious that their friendship cannot be rekindled, aside from the fact that Lily and Aidan are using different names until Aidan destroys the last of the Order of St. Lucian. The last thing they need is someone who knows them under their previous identities.

Then we come to James, who had been in Aidan’s employ for several years, and who had posed as Lily’s father during the time that they had been on the run from the Order of St. Lucian. I think it would be dangerous for James to be in Lily and Aidan’s lives. Remember when Lily left James to go and find Aidan, she waited until the bus had travelled quite some distance before attempting to draw money from her account. She had not wanted to lead the Order of St. Lucian to James and his new family, wanting him to enjoy his new found happiness in peace. After she had found Aidan again, she had sent James an email to tell him she was safe and had found Aidan. I believe that it should end there. There is no way that they could remain anything more than old friends who occasionally communicate via email, as anything more than that would put James at risk. And how would they explain the fact that they were not getting any older to James? Let’s face it, due to their immortality they would have to live an existence that involved moving frequently, living quietly, and avoiding long term friendships. Sounds like a lonely existence, and that was how Aidan had lived before meeting Lily, but now at least they had each other, forever. Sounds like a dream come true.

So then I thought, couldn’t I explore that a little further, how Aidan teaches Lily to use her powers, and how she experiences life as an immortal. But then I thought that’s far too much like Twilight, after Bella became a vampire, and she and Edward romped through the woods and he taught her to hunt, and she developed her powers. Yeah, that’s been done, and I had no interest in going down that avenue. So that was that then. For the sake of showing how awkward a meeting between Lily and Suzy would’ve been, what follows is a scene I had reworked over and over, and had eventually given up on. It’s not fully edited, nor complete, but you will see what I mean.

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“Lily!”

Lily froze as she heard her name. She knew that voice. For a moment, she considered ignoring the cry and disappearing into one of the many fashion shops lining London’s Bond Street. But then she paused. Aidan wasn’t with her, so what could be the harm?

She turned and saw Suzy rushing towards her with outstretched arms and joy on her face, her aura displaying nothing but love and happiness. Lily couldn’t help but to respond with a smile, despite everything that had happened.

Suzy slammed into her a second later and hugged her hard. “I can’t believe it, here you are,” she said, releasing Lily but still keeping a hold on her arm, as if she was worried she might disappear. “You guys just vanished, and nobody could tell me where you had gone. Lily, it’s been three years.”

“Hi Suzy, how have you been?” Lily asked, shrugging lightly to remove Suzy’s hand from her arm.

“I’ll tell you everything,” Suzy said, excitement in her tone, “but not here. Let’s go to that coffee shop over there and get something to drink, then we can talk in peace and quiet.”

Lily wasn’t sure if she was up to that kind of in-depth conversation, but then decided that Suzy would probably talk mostly about herself, and all she had to do was listen. “That sounds like a great plan,” she said, injecting a note of enthusiasm in her voice.

Suzy hooked her arm into Lily’s arm and headed for the café at a brisk walk. Soon they were settled at a table, steaming cups of coffee in front of them, and Suzy finally seemed to relax. She smiled happily. “Can you believe it, halfway across the world, and we run into each other. I mean, what are the odds of that?”

Lily didn’t know, but was sure that fate had caused their paths to cross. She had wanted to contact Suzy so many times, but Aidan had advised against it, saying that Suzy couldn’t be trusted, and that it was only out of respect for their friendship that he had allowed her to escape unpunished after causing them such misery. But this was different, surely. A chance meeting in London. Really, what were the odds?

“Well, clearly this was meant to be,” Lily said with a smile. “So tell me, what have you been up to since I last saw you.”

Suzy beamed happily, holding her left hand towards Lily. “I’m married. Benji popped the question after I graduated. I missed you so much at my wedding. One of my cousins stood in as my matron of honor, but I so wanted it to be you. I’m so sorry that you couldn’t be there.”

Lily shrugged and shut her lips tight against the words of accusation that threatened to burst forth. Better to play it cool. She couldn’t confront Suzy with the facts because how would she explain knowing exactly what had happened. This had been a mistake. She should’ve shrugged Suzy off while they had been on the street.

“How’s Aidan?” Suzy asked. “And your baby. He must be around three by now.”

“Aidan is fine, thank you,” Lily said, taking a big sip of her scalding cappuccino. That was a mistake, she thought wryly as her violated skin instantly healed and the pain faded. But the pain of the burn had at least distracted her from her anger. She put her cup down with exaggerated care and looked up at Suzy. “There is no baby.”

“Hah, I knew it,” Suzy said loudly, causing a few of the other customers to glance at them curiously. She hunched her shoulders and sank down in her chair. “Sorry.”

“What did you know, Suzy,” Lily asked in a measured tone.

“Aidan made you get rid of it, just as I predicted. Were you even still pregnant that time when we spoke on the phone?”

“I was highly pregnant, actually.”

“So where’s the baby?”

Lily took a deep breath. She wanted to punish Suzy for what she had done, and the misery she had caused them, but she could never tell her the truth. But perhaps she could tell her a sanitized version of the truth. “Men invaded our property and tried to harm me and Aidan. We managed to escape into our panic room, but the shock of what had happened sent me into early labor. The baby didn’t survive.”

Suzy sat frozen, staring at her with wide eyes, and her aura showed guilt warring with intense sadness and shock.

“The birth nearly killed me,” Lily continued, “but we were trapped in the panic room and couldn’t get help, because the men were searching the property, still looking for us. Aidan tried everything to keep me alive but I eventually lost consciousness. When I woke, I was in hospital. They told me I had been in a coma for three months. I spent many more months in hospital after that, trying to recover my health.”

“And where was Aidan?” Suzy asked softly, dread in her eyes.

“He was there when I woke up,” Lily said, forcing the lie past tight lips, knowing she could never tell Suzy the truth of Aidan’s captivity at the hands of Charles’ father, Senator Logan.

Suzy’s freckles stood in stark contrast against her pale skin as she stared at Lily, consternation on her face. “I don’t understand. We went back, but the police wouldn’t give us any information. I searched for you, Lily. I phoned all the hospitals in New York, but I couldn’t find you.”

Lily clenched her teeth as she feigned ignorance. “What are you talking about, Suzy?”

Suzy dropped her gaze and stared at her coffee cup without answering.

“I asked you a question,” Lily said, determined to get her to confess. Aidan had suffered so much because of Suzy’s meddling. She should just have stayed out of their affairs.

Suzy let out a small cry and covered her downturned face with trembling hands, but tears dripped copiously from between her fingers. “I’m so sorry, Charles fooled me. I was so stupid,” she mumbled in a thick voice. Her shoulders shook as muffled sobs escaped from behind her hands.

Lily couldn’t keep it up. The revenge had soured in her mouth. She stared at the rich red of Suzy’s hair, gathered in a ponytail of riotous curls, and she knew she could never hold her actions against her. She and Aidan had travelled into the past to the time before the attack on the mansion and had seen how Charles had fooled Suzy, and how Benji and Suzy had called the police in an attempt to stop Charles when they had realized their mistake. At least the gunfight between the St. Lucians and the police had warned her and Aidan of impending danger, giving them time to get to the shelter, so even though Suzy had betrayed them, she and Benji had also tried to save them from harm.

The waiter appeared next to their table, ready to take their food order. His eyes stretched when he saw Suzy crying. “We’re alright,” Lily said, waving him away.

“Suzy, dry your tears,” Lily said gently as she manipulated Suzy’s aura, calming her so that they could talk without more dramatics.

Suzy kept her face downturned at as she rummaged in her handbag and found a handful of tissues. She pressed the tissues to her face, noticeably calmer. “Sorry for making such a scene,” she whispered in a raw voice. “For the last three years I’ve been trying to make peace with what I had done. The guilt was killing me, but I consoled myself that you and Aidan had to be happy somewhere in the world. Now I find out that it was even worse than I imagined. I’m so sorry.”

* * * *

And really, where does the conversation go from there. Lily can never be truthful. She already hates herself for every lie she is being forced to tell. And Suzy will remember how she had betrayed Lily every time they speak. So this friendship can never be rekindled, because it will cause pain and discomfort to Lily and to Suzy. Not forgetting the fact that Lily would then be going against Aidan’s wishes, as he had advised her not to contact Suzy.

To answer the question about Aidan’s stolen antique furniture, yes, of course he recovered all his furniture, and Charles died horribly. Again, there seemed to be little point in writing a scene where Aidan put an end to Charles, because the main question would have been, does he boil him in his own juices, or does he set him on fire. And I think we’ve had enough scenes where Aidan has done that to his enemies. It would have read like a rerun if I had attempted to write such a scene. So there it is. I guess that’s all I can say. I hope that I’ll be able to start on my new manuscript soon.

About Niki Savage

Author of the Crossfire Trilogy, the Blackstone Trilogy and the Driftwood Trilogy, available at Amazon. Find me on Twitter @nikisavage http://nikisavage.com

Posted on June 21, 2018, in Books, Excerpts from Blackstone, Ramblings and tagged , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 7 Comments.

  1. I certainly never meant to cause such a dilemma. Please understand that things that are obvious to some people are not going to be obvious to others. There will be readers who are just fine with several aspects of a story not being spelled out. They use their imaginations and decide how they want the story to end, or they are discerning enough to intuit the writer’s intent without the details being spelled out. Then there are others who don’t want to guess about things. They want to know what the true, complete vision of the story is from the one who is creating it. I’m one of those people in the second category. My questions and comments came from a place of ignorance of what all is involved in the writing process. I’ve never had the opportunity to communicate directly with an author before, and I’m mortified at what you’ve gone through the last few months. What you’ve put yourself through, to be clear. It was your decision to let it go on as long as you did, and you need to take responsibility for your own choices, instead of making an innocent reader feel embarrassed and humiliated for wanting a few more details.

    It’s been several months since I’ve looked at any of the books, so I have to just go on what I remember my initial reactions to be.

    I honestly don’t remember reading that Lily contacted James by email at any point after she returned to New York, telling him that she was safe and with Aidan. I can see your point, that they would only be able to be email friends in the future.

    I also understand your reasoning regarding the relationship between Lily and Suzie not being salvageable, once you gave the explanation…the explanation which also gave the details which helped me put the question to rest. I do kinda still wonder if its possible for Aidan and Lilly to still have the mansion in the woods after everything that happened. Even after he wipes out the St Lucians, the police know about the property now, so it’s no longer a safe haven. That’s so sad. Oh, by the way, what happened to the cops that were in the shootout with Charles’ goons? Were they all killed?!

    And speaking of Charles, when someone that evil, who has done that much harm to innocent people, gets his comeuppance, it needs to be shown, not left to the imagination. All the other really bad guys got smoked, so why not him. I’m sorry such a request taxed your imagination beyond endurance. And I’m sorry for any trouble I caused. It was never my intention to be a burden. I won’t trouble you again.

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    • Actually, I need to revise my statement above to provide more clarity. All I wanted was a little more detail on points that were missing. I never expected a whole other book or several more chapters or a huge epilogue. You were talking along those lines so I thought that meant you had more story in your head in regards to them, and I thought, oh okay, well that will be interesting. But what was in my mind was that I knew that you had put through a revised edition of Lily’s Reprieve that made changes to some scenes that made more sense and gave more complete information which was much more satisfying. I guess Aidan’s Redemption was updated too, though I didn’t catch the changes. So I thought that you could do the same with Blackstone Resurrection. The story was there, there were just a few details missing that were probably just legitimate oversights. You did rather have a lot on your mind at the time you were writing the book. 😏
      Regarding James, I’ve acknowledged that I missed the info that Lilly emailed him. I was operating under the impression that he was left hanging, worrying about her fate. The fact that he had some kind of answer and could go on with his new life in peace is acceptable. I agree that it doesn’t make sense that he could actually be in their lives anymore. At some point Aidan would have had to break off from him anyway due to his immortality.
      Regarding Lilly and Suzie, the reasons you gave that their relationship couldn’t continue makes sense. I know you were uncomfortable with the scene you wrote where the girls encountered each other in London 3 years later, but that scene gave the details that answered the questions I was left with. What happened to Benji and Suzie, what they knew, that Aidan and Lilly time-traveled to get answers, and that that encounter, as awkward as it was for both girls, brought some closure for Lilly and gave her some answers she needed. Character growth.
      I didn’t really expect you to write a bunch of stuff regarding Lilly learning the ropes of immortality. It was fine that you didn’t.
      Another missing point was how much time was passing when Aidan was a prisoner and Lilly was in the hospital. That section was quite vague and rather disorienting. We didn’t know where they were or how much time had passed. It’s hard to draw your own conclusions about things when you don’t understand the timeline of the information you were given.
      Another thing that confused me was after Lilly was immortal and she could see Senator Logan’s aura, I didn’t remember what that color meant. Was it purple? You talked in the earlier books about what black, shrunken auras meant, but I don’t remember what purple signifies. It would have been nice to have a reminder.
      I’ve also been wondering about the aftermath of the shootout at the estate between the cops and the St Lucians. What do the cops/ general public know? I know Aidan and Lilly need to travel for awhile, but can they retain the estate now that it’s no longer a secret?
      Those were the questions I was left with, which would have just required tweaking or adding on to a few scenes. Minor expansion stuff. But if you are unwilling to do that and are satisfied with the book as is, then we as readers will respect your decision as the author. I’m sorry that what started out so positive and respectful turned into something so negative and embarrassing.
      Good luck with your next book, but I’m afraid I won’t be reading it.

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      • Just wondering why my comments are still awaiting moderation 6 days later. Did I mess up by not putting a spoiler alert notification at the beginning? I thought this whole post was a spoiler alert for anyone who hasn’t read the trilogy, so I thought that my comments were covered by the spoiler alert written at the beginning of the blog post. Sorry if I was mistaken in that.
        I’m also sorry if I overreacted a bit, but I was concerned and disconcerted at how long it took for you to get back to us about the 3rd book. I didn’t realize that I wasn’t clear in my request for a few extra details to be added for clarification, as apposed to writing a novella, a large epilogue, or another whole book. I never at any time believed that your story was that incomplete. My concern when I read your blog was that you spent so much time trying to take the revision of the book so much further than I intended, that now that we all know what the problem was, you may not have the time (schedule-and deadline-wise) or the inclination to do the fixes. Fixes that I know would take some time to do because of having to go through the entire manuscript again to figure out where to insert the extra info or add on an extra scene or two, but would have been very minor compared to what you were attempting.
        So, once again, the points were:
        1. James–I’m going to have to take your word for it that Lilly emailed him because I don’t remember that at all.
        2. Somehow indicating the passage of time while Lilly was recovering and Aidan was a prisoner, either while it was all occurring or how they figured it out afterwards, even if it’s just the readers that know and not the characters.
        3. What does the purple aura indicate? We know what black, shrunken auras are and that pink ones mean love, red ones mean lies, golden ones I’m not sure about but I know it’s positive. Sometimes the color was given but not what it meant. Sometimes Aidan or Lilly saw a certain emotion coming from someone but the color of the aura indicating that wasn’t given. It got a bit confusing trying to keep all that straight.
        4. The aftermath of the attack on the estate. What did the cops and/or public know about Aidan and Lilly because of the incident. It’s hard to draw conclusions about what’s salvageable and what’s lost for good when you don’t know how exposed they are as a result of what happened.
        5. The relationship between Lilly and Suzy and Benji. Though you weren’t satisfied with the scene you wrote about the girls, is there a way to insert the information given in that scene in another way? Because as badly as Suzy betrayed the both of them, Lilly still had feelings and questions that needed to be resolved. Just somehow indicating that Aidan and Lilly time-traveled to get answers as to what happened, what those answers were, and what conclusions they drew would probably suffice. The girls wouldn’t necessarily have to meet up again if you felt it just doesn’t make sense.
        6. I said earlier that I agreed that it wasn’t necessary to show Lilly learning about her new powers, but one question I had regards the drifting they do while sleeping. Because Lilly drifted the first time she slept after becoming immortal, I think it would be logical to have her talk to Aidan about that and what they’re going to do to protect each other. Can they still as anchor each other now that they’re both immortal, or do they have to sleep at different times so as to pull each other back from the netherworld?
        7. Charles. Now that’s a hard one. I can see your point about not being repetitive. I really did want to see Aidan and Lilly catch up to him though. Maybe just that they find him somewhere, the satisfying dialogue they have telling him off, and some kind of fade to black where the reader knows he’s about to meet a satisfactory, grisly end but are spared repetitive details.
        So, I hope you’ll reconsider a revision, if it’s not too late. And if it is, so be it. As I said before, we readers will have to respect your decision.

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      • Hi Melissa, I’ve read your comment. Please give me a day or two to go through the manuscript and my notes to see how I can accommodate your requests. As you’ve said, making some adjustments will be easier than a extra add on. I do have the inclination to do the fixes. I’ll get back to you on the weekend. I hope you have a great day. 🌺

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      • Hi there, Melissa. I’ve spent the weekend looking at the manuscript and these fixes are totally doable. I’ll get going on it right away and anticipate I’ll be done in the next ten days. I’ll announce it here as soon as it is available.

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  2. I can’t wait for your next book. Best books I have ever read. I very impatiently await the next book. Your characters are the most facinating people. I just loved all your books. You are without doubt my favourite writer.

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  3. Hi Jodie. I’m thrilled that you’ve enjoyed my books. It’s going to be a while before I publish another book but if you like you can subscribe to my blog because I will always announce it here first. I hope you have a wonderful day.

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